Here is my diary entry to have a look at if it helps. I have included some fronted adverbials and some different adjectives. For the rest of this week I would like you to write your own including a variety of features referring back to your plan as well. Make sure that you are checking spellings as you go and then see if you can do an edited/ improved version later in the week. Happy writing!
We are committed to safeguarding and promoting the welfare of children and we operate a vigorous Safeguarding and Child Protection Policy. A comprehensive screening process, including an enhanced disclosure check, will be undertaken on all staff and volunteers.